Category Archives: Body

Especially beginners like to use qualifiers in the erotic description of bodies. The protagonist has “a great body”, “beautiful breasts” etc. But these qualifiers have no information value and are not able to create vivid pictures while reading. In this category, we want to consider how things can be done differently.

Frisuren im Roman “Nur eine Liste” von Siobahn Vivian

Nach meinem Gespräch mit Stina achte ich beim Lesen offensichtlich stärker auf die Beschreibung von Haaren als vorher. Gerade fiel mir der Roman “Nur eine Liste” von Siobhan Vivian in die Hände. Das Buch ist eher ‘Young Adult‘ als ‘New Adult‘, nicht nur wegen der Altersstufe ihrer Protagonistinnen. Sex kommt darin vor, wird von Vivian … Continue reading Frisuren im Roman “Nur eine Liste” von Siobahn Vivian

Naming skin tones

Like a raw-boned Libyan, his taupe-colored complexion was over-exposed to Sebastian’s eyes, which were acclimated to the darkened interior. (Jonathan Malone: Invictus) There are now a wide variety of color scales available online for naming skin tones. Unfortunately, these are not standardized. Everyone has a different idea – this becomes clear at the latest when … Continue reading Naming skin tones

DESCRIBING SKIN – TAN LINES AND OTHER SKIN COLOR PHENOMENA

Many women have tan lines. This is perfectly normal, as long as the tan was acquired naturally and not in a solarium. This makes it all the more strange that tan lines are rarely mentioned in erotic literature. But they make the skin look alive. Experience shows that the tan is accentuated by the contrast. … Continue reading DESCRIBING SKIN – TAN LINES AND OTHER SKIN COLOR PHENOMENA